Chapter 33 changes

Heyo! Good day folks!!

I received a much appreciated feedback on a certain forum that the final chapter of arc 1 is somehow missing certain things and confusing. It also did not digest well after reading.

Hence without compromising the intention of the story line for this chapter, I added new sentences as well as a note (or 2) to make it clearer.

I hope it reads more agreeably now for you 😀

For those who have read it, please do not hesitate to read it again. I cannot say for sure how much it has improved, as it is for you to decide  😀 (but it is!! 😛 )

And once again, I thank the readers for their feedback and suggestions 😀

It beats hiring a proofreader and editor/publisher 😀

Cheerios and enjoy!

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