Heyo! Good day folks!!
I received a much appreciated feedback on a certain forum that the final chapter of arc 1 is somehow missing certain things and confusing. It also did not digest well after reading.
Hence without compromising the intention of the story line for this chapter, I added new sentences as well as a note (or 2) to make it clearer.
I hope it reads more agreeably now for you 😀
For those who have read it, please do not hesitate to read it again. I cannot say for sure how much it has improved, as it is for you to decide 😀 (but it is!! 😛 )
And once again, I thank the readers for their feedback and suggestions 😀
It beats hiring a proofreader and editor/publisher 😀
Cheerios and enjoy!